Did I make this poem too obtuse or is it understandable and do you poets post on poem hunter? - hunter floor fan
Betrayal
His whisper
gently fall to the ground
like leaves in autumn.
The evening breeze
and shake gently
empty
James Timothy Jarrett
Sunday, January 3, 2010
Hunter Floor Fan Did I Make This Poem Too Obtuse Or Is It Understandable And Do You Poets Post On Poem Hunter?
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